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Tuesday 10 December 2019

D4 A3 Mass Migration

I think Donald trump is making a huge mistake because people from mexico might want to come over to america to see their families and friends and it might be the same with america. America and mexico have been close for a long time and don´t want to separate. They are gonna waste there money going on a plane just to visit there family but it's better off just living in mexico. and people call him racist.

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  1. Hey Shawn,

    I'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.

    I like how you’ve thought about the issue and clearly shown what consequences you see will happen as a result, even down to the extra cost to people having to get a plane ticket. You’ve pointed out how their are a lot of family ties and friendship that could be damaged between the two countries. Well done Shawn.

    As you are year 7, I will leave you with the challenge to think of ways you can your blog post more interesting, maybe with more images or using slide shows, up to you.

    I’m looking forward to seeing more amazing work from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.

    Daniel

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