Writing -Cross Country

I was getting nervous, it was time to race. When it was time to go I ran slow and I spotted something out the corner of my eye? I wondered, “What was that? It looked scary.” I caught up to Xavier and said “I think I saw something and it was big and green.” When I looked again I saw that thing again but this time he had heaps of sharp teeth. It was moving fast on four legs , its skin is scaly it looked really scary. I made it pass the gate. I tried to catch up to Dante and Steven but I saw Zayden. I ran faster I was almost up to Zayden. I saw that scaly green thing again it was about to eat my friend. I grabbed a branch and hit the alligator over the head. It spun toward me. Zayden and I ran for the nearest classroom. We are learning to write a story about a animal chasing you I found it fun to do because it was so cool you can write any animal you want and I did a alligator I know that you know cause it says at the end of the story next time I would like to put some speech marks in my story's and do anther animal